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Medusa went to a beauty salon

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Done in PaintToolSai and PS CS5

Hi guys, this a concept I am working on, it's an advertising print for a beauty salon. It's really far in the working process but i have 3 and half more week to improve stuff. The thing is that I wanna inscribe It in a contestt o get it exposed in a creative exposition at July, and hopefully land a Job and stop counting coins; so I need it to be more than perfect. This being said, I'll really appreciate the slightest feedback you can give me.
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I love the idea and characters! it's hilarious.

Advise: hmm the main thing I would fix is the perspective. The pictures, furniture, tray, floor and characters all seem to be interacting in a different space. All you need for this piece is one point perspective. I'd search for a basic tutorial. I hate perspective, I honestly didn't figure it out until last year xD. Once you get the hang of it though it's so useful and will improve your art a lot, so it's defiantly worth the time to learn.

Small tips:
The background does not feel as well developed as the characters. I really like the textures but I feel some more details could make the couch feel more real. Maybe add cushions, indents where people sit, or raise it from the floor? Also adding maybe some shampoo or other hair products on the table in the back could help it not feel so empty. The man's posture feels slightly off to me, I think it's his leg? I'd suggest tweaking it. Maybe add some shine on the waitress's cheek so her face matches the rest of her body's level of shine?

Overall you did a beautiful job and I love your character design and concept. The people, snakes and textures are great. best of luck! and I hope this helps :)